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Saturday, March 12, 2022

A Drop of Ink- A poem by Mahendra Gonsalkorale

A drop of ink

Mahendra “Speedy” Gonsalkorale 









I am a drop of ink
one of many
trapped in a cylindrical barrel, a pen
my escape is manipulated
by a dextrous Sapiens hand
which guides my liberation
in successive dots to a parchment
merging into a meandering trail
that confers a meaning
a message
an edict
a story
an instruction
to the eye-equipped beholder
trained to transform visual images
to information and meaning

I spend a lot of my life
inseparable from my fellow drops
on that dot laden paper
drying,
dying
in our manuscript tomb
hidden and mostly forgotten
in a library of dead scrolls

And then a glimmer of hope
when the room is lit
by solar power during day time
and harnessed stored power at night
by a curious information seeker,
eyes lit with hope and anticipation
visiting my abode, my grave
and locates my parchment, the book

Satisfied with knowledge gained
through a visuo-cerebral transaction
whereby the meaning conferred
by the trail of our collective dots
on the parchment, is understood,
he leaves,

and I am alone again
bound within a book
trapped forever,

or so I think
Or, maybe not
for The Curious never die
and where there is curiosity
there is hope

which hopefully is not hopeless
and I can still live in hope

for another day, another time
lying still

Until….

12 comments:

  1. I love it Speedy. You convey your thoughts so beautifully. Your medical knowledge has crept into your creation in a delightfully subtle way. I also love the irregular rhythm of your poem...adds a dramatic tone.

    My heartiest congratulations on your superlative creative writing.
    It's so lovely to see the hidden talents of my dear friends emerging in such an impressive and awe inspiring way!
    Suri

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    1. Suri,thank you! Poetry writing is fun and it is always good to try different ways of writing them. I like the traditional rhyming poetry so well executed by Zita but I do like other types as well. I am glad you approve.

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  2. Mahen
    Thank you for the life and times of a drop of ink. Takes me back to those days of fountain pens, Royal Blue Quink and blotting paper. It still amazes me how our thoughts transform into written words and on to paper to last for years. There is an ocean of thoughts out there captured by a myriad of drops of ink to educate and enlighten us and also lie dormant to be discovered. Our thanks to the humble drop.
    They have been with us for several thousand years. The first evidence of writing with ink comes from Egypt 3200 BC.

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    1. Thanks, Nihal. Language and communication never cease to fascinate me. To think that the most profound phiosophy can be expressed by manipulating dots to become meaningful in such a multitude of ways is just mind boggling. Isn't it also amazing that all information is also coded in dots amd dashes!

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  3. I have always considered Omar Khayyam as a man of wisdom and his thoughts and poetry well ahead of his time. On this topic of ink and writing I cannot help but dip into his repertory of poems. His intelligence and sagacity is plain to see:

    “The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
    Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit
    Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
    Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.”
    ― Omar Khayyám

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  4. Mahendra
    I am amazed at your ceative imagination to think your self as a drop of ink and how your mind travels. I enjoyed your lovely poem. Well done!
    You are talented not only in Poetry, Music, Singing and Painting. Keep it up ! Chira

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    1. Thamks for your kind words Chira. Apart from my family members, you are the person I have known longest! Never hesitate to send me your lovely works of art whenever you are ready with them. It is a pleasure to post them.

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  5. Mahen, What a quaint and curious idea ! I loved the picture and the ‘science interspersed’ poem - Thank you.

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    1. Hi Rohini. This is what happens when you are retired and have time to wonder and ponder! Lateral thinking and chains of association are fascinating subjects.I do hope you have started thinking about a contribution for our Remembrance Day.

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  6. Suri, good to see you on the Blog.I am so pleased that you and Chira took so much trouble to post comments. That is important as contributors value them so much and they are encouraged and motivated to keep contributing. It is always nice to know that there are people listening to you when you shout!

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  7. Hello Mahen, I read this poem a few days ago and went through it rather quickly.
    Today I had the time to read it slowly and really ponder over your message and the visual images you were conveying. Earlier I thought you were merely waxing eloquent over something as mundane as a drop of ink, but today I was able to savor what you were attempting to convey; the written word, what it conveys, and how we interpret it, sometimes many years after the dots have dried on the paper and parchment. I loved your choice of words: "...on that dot laden paper dying, drying..." Also "...visuo-cerebral transaction whereby the meaning conferred by the trail of our collective dots..." I think it is a very clever poem! Thank you, Mahen.
    By the way, I love fountain pens too. But since they lay on my desk unused for months, each time I pick them up the ink has dried up and I have to perform some manoeuvre under running water to get them working again.

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    1. Srianee, I am delighted that you appreciated the way I attemoted to convey the deep meaning of how mere dots of ink can convey such a lot of meaning to us, Homo Sapiens. Language, at least f a more sophisticated kind, is what distingushes our species from others and the mode of communication through writing, carving in stone etc makes sure that each generation doesn't have to start from scratch although they may need to "scratch around" looking for that which has been left by our ancestors most relevant for them.

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